"Death of Infatuation"
A fine, thin line between
infatuation and love
so crossed is the line,
he thought of it
The music, pornography
and the movies
the onset of puberty and
the journey through adolescence
The line became Hazy.
A girl entered,
he called it love
others called it insanity
he called it madness of love.
The girl didn't understand his
love or infatuation
she merely was on an adventure
if ended badly, was a gain
Satan blessed or cursed him
she died in an accident
he kept cursing god.
At the funeral
he felt different
thanked god now
for making him miss her trip
He felt lucky that day
the day of the crash
the day of his flu.
At the funeral
Satan intervened
new girl entered
death of infatuation
or the beginning he wondered.
The line was again Hazy to him!!!
This song is my attempt at a pure death metal genre type song!! the underlying meaning and the non repetitive lyrics and the gross thoughts!! \m/
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ReplyDeletedeeply thought....
but i doubt if u/me wud ever get to know properly
macha..good one..tht line is always hazy for me :)
ReplyDeletenice poem but to compose this impossible ..no ryhme nothing...and y do u always want one more..and tht too at funeral..thu
hehe...thts the beauty of a death metal song..no need of rhythmis lyrics!!...at the funeral bcoz of satan nd the realization of his infatuation!!..gross thought though
ReplyDeletereal immature dude....real immature....:)!! Death metal needs no rhyming lyrics ....true ...but it DOES need a pattern ....cause ..no rhyme...is not a free pass to crap...!!It makes for a gud dark verse but not for a metal song.......and ...yeah...manu suxx!! _||_ _||_ ..........talk about freedom of speech in blogs days...amazin eh...\m/\m/
ReplyDeleteLazy fellow, think more, al your lines are a bit hazy, nice coherence though.
ReplyDeleteI know I am but summer to your heart, and not the full four seasons of the year.
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